Thursday, January 11, 2007

All We Need Is Some Love



ALL WE NEED IS SOME LOVE.mp3 [02.02.07] - completely re-recorded/updated w/harmonica break and raised in pitch.

ALL WE NEED IS SOME LOVE.mp3 [01.25.07] - w/drums!

ALL WE NEED IS SOME LOVE.mp3 [01.15.07]

VERSE
in the dark of the night
through the thickest fight
when you've got nothing to give

when the things that you hold
leave you shattered and cold
and you forget how to live


CHORUS
All you need is some love
A little help from above
When all hope is gone
All we need is some love


VERSE
when you sleep all alone
with a hand on the phone
wondering when it will ring

and you wish on that star
doesn't matter how far
'cause you'd give anything

CHORUS
What you need is some love
A little help from above
When you can't carry on
All we need is some love

BRIDGE [not sure about these lyrics at this point]
Never let the darkness in this world
Take away your spirit and your hope
Never stop believing in the day'
That violence and hatred won't be found

INSTRUMENTAL BREAK [as verse]

CHORUS
All you need is some love
A little help from above
When all hope is gone
All we need is some love

What you need is some love
What you need is some love
When all hope is gone
All we need is some love

All we need is some...
All we need is some...
All we need is some...
All we need is some Love


The Story of "All We Need Is Some Love"

This one has come about by simply playing a chord progression over and over the past few days. Oddly, for me, the chorus came first. I'd just sit here and hum some melodies over it and one seemed to be begging to be sung. Once I had the chord progression and melody somewhat nailed down, it seemed to me that the song was wanting to speak to this theme of love and hope. I've said many times that I don't really feel like I "write" songs, I just discover them. Peeling away the covering until it shines through. It pays to learn how to listen for the song, I suppose.

Once I had a basic chorus idea, I set to work on the verses. These came much slower (probably because I don't usually write them after the chorus). I made a conscious effort to keep the melody for the verses a bit lower and quieter (dynamically). Once I had hummed enough melodies and chosen one, I put the "meat on the bones" and wrote a couple of simple verse lyrics. All the while, trying to speak to this universal theme of love and hope.

This is very "naked" and bare. All my vocal and creative weaknesses are there for your perusal. In this take (one of the first), I was more concerned with the phrasing of the lyrics in relation to the music than how I was singing (obviously). I have a long way to go before I know how to perform this song. Being able to play it once and perform it are two different things, I think.

In the end, I can hear lots of soaring background vocals and organ as the song swells to it's climax, which I hear happening right in the middle of the last (longer) chorus.

But for now, here is a *very* rough/bare/naked draft of...

ALL WE NEED IS SOME LOVE.mp3 [02.02.07] - completely re-recorded/updated w/harmonica break and raised in pitch.

ALL WE NEED IS SOME LOVE.mp3 [01.25.07] - w/drums!

ALL WE NEED IS SOME LOVE.mp3 [01.15.07]

Thanks for listening,
John

6 comments:

sg said...

I was giving my kids a bath and put your song on play...I left singing the chorus.

I really like your verses too.
And your vocal performance is real, I like it! Some time those first takes are magical...regardless of the warts we see. :)

Oh, and I also made sure to wipe the soap out of the kids' eyes.

The Songwriting Apples are ROLLIN'!!

sg said...

Thanks for taking the risk of leaving it up.

John Natiw said...

Thanks Steve. I really like this new one, but I have to get used to hearing the "blemishes" in my vocals (especially the rough takes).
Thanks again,
J

John Natiw said...

Took a cue from Steve here and added a simple drum track to this one. Give a little... something... to the overall sound. I need to spend some time arranging these songs I'm writing with drums, bass, backing vocals and such. Maybe this is a start.
J

John Natiw said...

Ok, so I re-recorded this one. I wanted to use my spiffy new harmonica in the break, but that would require raising the pitch of the song to match the harp. Well... I did it and (to my great surprise!) the vocals didn't come out half bad! All this singing/writing must be helping. I also recorded some backing vocals for it. Check it out!

Isn't this fun?
J

sg said...

Loved the harmonica section!!
Totally fits.

:)

Good ol' harmonica.
I can't wait to find a use for MINE now.